NYC Subway

Remove or make the watermark more transparent. Due to the watermark being placed directly in the center and somewhat opaque, this makes it the focal point, instead of the actual piece. The overall piece is quite nice; lighting is perfect, perspective is good.

Honestly don't know what else to write, since Deviant Art has this ridiculous Critique feature making me type a critique with a hundred words when a single paragraph could be used.

Just make the watermark transparent is all I'm trying to say, since the default watermark is this level make your own if you have the original photo.